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please help me #1 (permalink) Sat Sep 17, 2011 17:58 pm   please help me
 

Would you support building a factory in your neighborhood?
I am from a small town. In my town many people are poor. If a new Building a factory in my neighborhood, there are lot of advantages and disadvantages, but I believe that my town will mostly beneficial from this factory because people can take lot of advantages form this factory. However there are some disadvantages also.
As we all know, factory brings the pollution. If this factory wills not mange the specify rules to building a factory then it is prone air and water pollutions. Cause of water and air pollution people does not have clean water to drink and not cline air. Mostly factories are usually making noise. Pollution like air pollution, water pollution, and noise pollution are cause of many diseases. Beside clean drinking water, clean air and no lot of noise should be necessary for to living in a community. If building a factory not maintains this entire requirement then factory will be relocated to new area.
On other hand, a factory brings lot of benefits for community. So I would support the plan build a factory in my community for all this reasons, which I will describe below.
First of all, if a factory built in community it will help to growing local infrastructure. To run smoothly, factory will have a steady and reliable supply of water and electricity. The resident’s living standard will increase as result as widespread changes and important benefit people of my town when many people will get clean water and electricity for 24 hours.
Secondly, if a factory will built in my community it will help to improve public transport. When a factory built to make employee commute more convenient, rebuilt roads and built new roads. Town residents can use public bus to schools, colleges, offices, shopping. As the result it can reduce air pollution.
Finally, most important point is employment. When a factory built it need many employees and many workers, and experts to do work in factory. If a factory built in my community local people, who live in town and other people who live near the town get the job. When many people get employed, it is reduce the number of unemployed people. The residents can take just few minutes to go for work.
In conclusion, generally an object has some advantages and some disadvantages. A factory built in my community has contains some advantages and some disadvantages, because of several advantages I agree with the plan. If the factory can be managed successfully, the factory and local residents can have mutual benefit.

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please help me #2 (permalink) Mon Sep 19, 2011 7:05 am   please help me
 

Hi Neha, i appreciate your way and support your thought. But i don't think that it's the correct space for having this discussion. Hope u get nice advices and all your query will be sorted-out. Good luck and thanks.
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please help me #3 (permalink) Mon Sep 19, 2011 14:00 pm   please help me
 

Thank you for checking my essay
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