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[Neha8july]

Do you agree or disagree? "Playing games is important for both children and adults."
I agree with the statement “playing game is important for both children and adults”. In this challenging world adult are work more hardly and they have no much time for relax, for better living they want body and mind fit. Playing games are help to keep body and mind remain fit and relax, but they can enjoy it also.
Games are two types’ physical and mental. Physical games help to former remain body fit whereas keep mind fit. There are following two types of games.
Physical games are includes indoor and out door games. In indoor games come like table tennis and outdoor games come like basketball, football. These games are not only increases blood circulation of body; playing games are burns extra fat percentage of our body that keeps fit and healthy our body. Games are teaches not only discipline, cooperation, respect of others, self-confidence, manors, face to difficult situation.
Mental games include like puzzles, quiz, and IQ. These games are increases our mental ability, thinking and imagination power. These games teach to making decisions, knowledge, improve our way of thinking, remanding thinks and allow taking right decision.
In some researches and doctors are also say playing games are good not for physical and mental health too. Adults have lot of presser of work, lot of tension of work and daily life. Through playing games they can relax and they have some time for themselves in this time they are far away from presser of work and tension for a few time.
In conclusion, games whether they are physical or mental, indoor or outdoor not only improves our lifestyle but also helps us achieve our goals in life. Therefore, playing games is important for adults

TOEFL listening discussions: A conversation between a student and a campus patrolman

[Katty2010]

Do you agree or disagree? "Playing games is important for both children and adults."

I agree with the statement “playing gameS is important for both children and adults”. In this challenging world adultS are work more hard and they DO noT HAVE much time TO relax. For better living they NEED TO KEEP THEIR body and mind fit. Playing games [s]are[/s] help to keep body and mind remain fit and relax, AND MAKES LIFE JOYFUL but they can enjoy it also.

Games are OF two types’ physical and mental. Physical games help to [s]former[/s] KEEP remain body fit whereas MENTAL GAMES keep mind fit. There are following two types of games.
Physical games are includes indoor and out door games. In Indoor games come like INCLUDE table tennis and outdoor games come like INCLUDE GAMES LIKE basketball AND football. These games are not only HELP IN increasINGs blood circulation of body; playing games are burns extra fat percentage of our body that keeps US fit and healthy our body. Games are teaches US not only discipline, cooperation, respect FOR others, self-confidence, manNErs, AND HOW TO face A difficult situation.

Mental games include like puzzles, quizES, and IQ. These games are increases our mental ability, thinking and imagination power. These games teach US to makE decisions, knowledge, improve our way of thinking, remanding thinks and allow taking right decision.

ACCORDING TO some researcheRs and doctors are also say playing games IS good not for physical and mental health too. Adults have lot of pressUrE of work, lot of tension of work and daily life. Through playing games they can relax and they have some time for themselves in this time they are far away from pressUrE of work and tension for a few time.

In conclusion, games whether they are physical or mental, indoor or outdoor not only improve our lifestyle but also helps us achieve our goals in life. Therefore, playing games is important for adults. ( WOW!!! FINALLY CONCLUSION IS SOMEWHAT CORRECT) NEHA HOW MANY BOOKS HAVE YOU READ IN YOUR LIFE TIME? 2 OR 3?)

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[Neha8july]

thank you for checking my essay