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Kindly check my mistakes, I will be thankful to you. Thanks in advance. :) #1 (permalink) Sun Sep 18, 2011 18:21 pm   Kindly check my mistakes, I will be thankful to you. Thanks in advance. :)
 

When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success. “Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.

Some people believe that luck play a vital role to obtain the success. But in my view, luck and hard work don’t have any correlation among them. If we evaluate the life of successful people, most of them achieved their targets by working hard, not on luck and also success without hard work is simply impossible for the vast majority of world population. The restless hard work is essential for education and job too. The reason and details listed below will strengthen my point if view.

First, if someone depends totally on luck, he/she will take great risk and there will be chances of their failure, however if someone work hard their success are definite. The success by luck can not one guarantee and there will be disappointment if it doesn’t work. Instead of believing on luck, one should strive hard to achieve their goal; even if someone fails it will bring you at least close to your goal. The dark side of luck is that, someone doesn’t know what is the destination? When someone works hard know its target very well. And can organize or adopt different strategies for reach there.

Secondly, if we take the education as key factor, we notice that for graduating and admitting into a university how much hard work is required. One should prepare itself for entry test and then to obtain a degree someone has to strive hard and wake up days and nights. Undoubtedly someone can’t rely on luck in such cases, as to qualified from a good university is essential in order to get a good job and to accomplish some of their goals and dreams. In my life time, I haven’t met with a person who graduates from a university without hard work.

In addition, it is also impossible with indolent and lack of knowledge seeking for a job. Nowadays there is so much competition at work side. Luck plays no role here. Suppose if someone get a job by chance he/she would be enable to continue the job. After sometime he/she will be requested to leave the job. So working hard is the only way to apply for a job.

In a nut shell, hard work has significant importance in order to get success. In some cases luck also have part but the success which get by luck will be till short period of time. I strongly believe that success without hard work is impossible.

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Re: Kindly check my mistakes, I will be thankful to you. Thanks in advance. :) #2 (permalink) Wed Sep 21, 2011 6:06 am   Re: Kindly check my mistakes, I will be thankful to you. Thanks in advance. :)
 

Waghma wrote:
Some people believe that luck play a vital role to obtain the success. But in my view, luck and hard work don’t have any correlation among them.


Hi,
hard work ==> success
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