Some people prefer to get up early

[Tyyna]

Some people prefer to get up early in the morning and start the day work. Others prefer to get up later in the day and work until later at night. Which one do you prefer?

All people are different and have used to a different habits. Someone prefer to stay late in bed, others like more to get up with the first rays of the sun and start their day earlier in the morning. Personally for me get up early in the morning and start the day work in better option than getting up later and work until late.

First of all, getting up early in the morning is more natural for me. Doing that I feel better later, during that day, and I can work more productively. I did not feel sleepy or beaten up many hours in a row. Contrary, wen I have a chance to stay in bed a little bit longer, for example till ten o’clock, I can’t open my eyes much longer and I want to go back to bed. Also it feels like half of a day already gone and I falling behind the schedule.

Secondly,starting day earlier I getting a sensation that I have more time and I can accomplish more tasks. For example, my school was working from nine o’clock last year and they changed schedule to eight o’clock this year. This is only one hour difference, but children getting out of the school earlier by one hour and for them it is one extra hour to play outside, especially in winter, when will become dark earlier.

Finally, I like early morning, when everything start to wake up: birds are singing, bugs are buzzing. The air still fresh and not polluted, because there is not so many cars yet on the road and I can work more effectively during the day. For these reasons I prefer to start my day early in the morning.

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[Iris87]

All people are different and have used to a different habits. Someone prefer to stay UNTIL late in bed AND others like more to get up with the first rays of the sun and TO start their day earlierY in the morning. Personally for me getTING up early in the morning and startING the day work iS A better option than getting up later and work until late.

First of all, getting up early in the morning is more natural for me. Doing that I feel better later, during thatE day, and I can work more productively. I didO not feel sleepy or beaten up many hours in a row. ON THE Contrary, wHen I have a THE chance to stay in bed a little bit longer THAN USUAL, for example UNtil ten o’clock, I can’t open my eyes much longer and I want to go back to bed. Also it feels like half of a day HAS already gone and I AM falling behind the schedule.

Secondly,starting MY day earlier I getting a sensation that I have more time and I can accomplish more tasks. For example, my school was working STARTED from AT nine o’clock last year and they changed schedule to eight o’clock this yearBUT THIS YEAR THE SCHEDULE CHANGED AND IT STARTS AT EIGHT O'CLOCK. This is only one hour difference, but IT IS IMPORTANT FOR children getting out of the school earlier by one hour and for them it is one BECAUSE THEY HAVE AN extra hour to play outside, especially in winter, when willIT becomeS dark earlier.

Finally, I like TO WAKE UP early IN THE morning, when everything start to wake up: birds are singing, bugs are buzzing. The air IS still fresh and not polluted because there is ARE not so many cars yet on the road YET and I can work more effectively during the day. For these reasons I prefer to start my day early in the morning.

Nice one! Try not to shorten words for example you must write "until" and not "till". Moreover, try to find more formal words and reduce the phrasal verbs. For example, "getting out of school" is not an appropriate phrase. If you can't find a word then try to write your sentence in a different way as I did above writing that "This is only one hour difference, but IT IS IMPORTANT FOR children BECAUSE THEY HAVE AN extra hour to play outside". It just sounds better to me.
I must say again that I am not a native speaker. I am just trying to help. I'm posting some of my essays too for correction but I have not seen a reply yet:(

[Tyyna]

Thanks a lot!!!