 #2 (permalink) Tue Sep 27, 2011 18:39 pm Re: Please grade my essay. |
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| MaQa wrote: |
I think there is too much violence in movies.
Thousand years ago people could not depict, that films would be essential part of our life. However today, films play a significant role in our life. That’s because film industry has been improved SINCE THE 20th century. There are a great amount of people who can not imagine their life without filmS. Despite THIS FACT, there are some negative sights of films. An argument has been proposed that “there is too much violence in movies”. I do agree with this statement. Below I would like to illustrate some types of movies which can be considered as films which promulgate violence.
First and foremost, the horror movies are deemed as movies which have the most violenT. So, in these films one character kills another OTHER people only for HIS/HER satisfaction. He does these brutalities with originally sadism. Moreover, another types of films such as IS mystical films that are ALSO related to the films which have violence. In these movies SPIRITS come back from other world and tries to kill people or pain them. However there are not any evidences that they could back. These movies have a great EFFECT ON people’s brainS and, in figurative meaning, are able to destroy their mindS. In addition, the FILM companies which shoot these movies have great amount of profit thanks to horror and mystic films. It means that a lot of people watch these movies and AT the same time MANY people are able to be influenced by them. As a result, people are very aggressive today because they are watchers of these movies.
Furthermore, there is much violence in the animated movies/CARTOON. As, today, the new animated films show brutal scenes, too. To clarify my words, sometimes ago there were the animated films which taught us to be polite, friendly and to have other good qualities. However today’s animated films demonstrate more violence. Additionally, the film variations of the comics have a great amount of cruelty. Considering that the target auditory of these movies ISthe children, there are can be very dangerous effects for ON our community. These bad effects are able to influence their mindS and change THEM in a bad WAY. Watching the new animated films, children will try to repeat the actions of the protagonist which are very noxious. They will be crueler to the coeval children, also they will show more violence and more importantLY, it will take their mind from reality. Hence, there are will be very important and perilous conclusions for our society.
In conclusion, there are many factors which convince me to agree with THE statement that “there is too much violence in movies”. To detail, horror, mystic and new animated films includes to the films which have violence. According to my personal estimation eliminating of these types of films is our commitment. |
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