I would be appreciate if anybody could note my errors in my writing.

[Rasoul3]

From my point of view, every one has their own talent and potential creativity in their life and there are several reasons to support such statement. First and for most every person who comes into this world is unique person in terms of face, talent, racing and so forth. A typical example for this is various people in various races and cultures in different parts of the world. Physically every races and nations has their specification based on their genes that they heritage from their parents. For example African has bigger lunge which help them to be a faster runner. Secondly, also lots of people have their own talent, but it is essential for them to develop its. For example if children nurture patiently and have a suitable educational system, their talents in various ways improve. On the other hand if they are not educated sufficiently, their ability suppressed and they never could develop their ability. After mentioning theses two points that every one has their own talent and it is essential to develop them, we should consider that some of persons are really extra ordinary intelligent. Persons such as Isaac Newton, Einstein, and so forth. To sum up I want to reiterate that all people have their own talent, mental ability and creativity, but it is essential to develop their talents in a systematical way and at last we should accept that some of people are extra ordinary talented and show unique ability of creativity in their life.

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What's the topic?

[Rasoul3]

Do you think creativity is something that you can actually foster (encourage)? Or are people simply born creative? Which of these things best describe you?

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[Rasoul3]

Thank you very much indeed.