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Writing for TOEFL- #1 (permalink) Fri Sep 30, 2011 23:14 pm   Writing for TOEFL-
 

I am of the person who believes that by increasing the number of casino, the economic situation will never improve, and there are several reasons for such statement. First and for most employment rate decreases by increasing the number of casinos, for example lots of people have temptation to bring their money to these casinos and waste their money in those places. This phenomena causes lots of people addict to gambling and by this method they are attracted to gambling and they do not like to work and produce real products. Hence some of people lose their intention to work hard and they are thinking about just by gambling they could earn lots of money. Secondly, by increasing the number of casinos, lots of social problems increases in the society which at last imposed huge amount of money on the government. For instance a couple of days ago a conflict in a casino in Mexico City resulted in death of 53 people and firing them which was a very bad occurrence. These occurrences completely illustrate the side effects of increasing of casino in the society. Afterwards of this conflict is that 53 families miss their parents or members of their family. Thirdly, to me at least, government should think about works to have real products in the field of Agriculture, Technology, so forth. To sum up I would like to reiterate that government by increasing the number of casinos could not increase the revenue because these casinos increase the number of crimes in the society

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