correct my essay:Advertising is the main cause of unhealthy eating habits.

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With the development of society, heath problem become more and more important. By a recently survey, nearly 75 percent of health caused by unhealthy eating habits. Some people blame that advertises is the main reason. I strongly disagree with it. In my point of view, advertise should not take the main responsibility for unhealthy eating habits.

The thing I put forward is most unhealthy eating habits are not caused by other reasons, advertise is not the main reason. Some people may have to sit in front of the computer for a day, some they always use fast food to instead of dinner. Some people eat too much at one meal so they do not want to eat at next meal. Also, if a person does not attend outdoor activities regularly and always stay at home, it's easy to he or she to form an unhealthy eating habit like eat too much potato chip instead of dinner.

Moreover, some people do not have unhealthy eating habits because they use an incorrect method to lose weight. Some people who think breakfast is not important and do not have breakfast could help them to lose weight. As we know, breakfast is equally important as lunch and dinner, do not have breakfast is a unhealthy eating habit and none advertise told you do not have your breakfast, on the other hand, some advertise like the subway always have a advertise about half price for breakfast and in my hometown you could see Mcdonald breakfast advertise everywhere.

What's more, today's most advertise are focus on healthy. Advertise about how to keep fit, how does a Adidas' shoes could help do well in basketball and there are less advertise about foods and eating and most of them tells people how fresh and health their food is. So, if a person is effected by advertise, he or she must always think to become health.

In a conclusion, advertise is not the main reason for unhealthy eating habits and if a person who have unhealthy eating habit could find his or her unhealthy eating awareness like unhealthy diet method or unhealthy working habit, the unhealthy eating habit will gone.

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