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Soon people who can not work with computer will be disadvantaged. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this idea?

Nowadays, Computer are really important in many jobs.
Already children in the school have contact with the computer. They learn to work with the computer and in every households there is at least one computer.
People with good education and experience with the work on the computer have an advantage to find a job.
In many profession you have to work with computer.
For example many factories can not work without computer. Every step of a procedure is programed by the computer. For example in the food industries, car industries and in the textile industry.
In the medical, a large numbers of fields works with computer. Many medical instruments are controlled by computer. With the help of computer the doctor is to be able to find disease in a early stadium. It would be highly dangerous for the people without computer.
Also the police can not work without computer. Each police car disposed about computer. All police officer has an education to work with the computer. So it is possible to protect the people, to find criminal person and to decrease the criminality.
Finally, I agree that people who to be unable to work with computer will be disadvantaged because these people have no chance to find a good job with attractive salary.
But to work with the computer can even be adverse for the people because people will be replaced by the computer and so the people will be unemployment.
In this case I have to disagree with this idea.

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TOEFL listening lectures: A university lecture in the Social Sciences Department