for scientific writting

[Huhuiowen]

Hi, everyone,

I do not know if I talk about some issues of scientific writting here is right. The following is the point:

The resultant discrepancy is up to 7.63%, indicating that the TLS model can provide a high accuracy of up to 7.63% for landslide stability analysis than can the simplified model.

I am not sure if the phrase after 'than' is right, because I am used to writting down 'than the simplified model can'.

Look forward to your help. Thanks a lot!

[Beeesneees]

Here's how I'd write it:
The resultant discrepancy indicates that the TLS model can provide a higher accuracy (of up to 7.63%) for landslide stability analysis than the simplified model.
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Cheers m' dears!

[Huhuiowen]