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[Waghma]

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television, newspaper, magazines, and other media pay too much attention to the person lives of famous people such as public figures and celebration. Use specific reason and details to explain your opinion.

I fully support the statement that media is always trying to dig up the personal lives of celebrities. These TV channels and other source of media usually for enterprising and make interesting their channels and attract more and more people towards their channels dig up the past actions of the celebrities, without realizing the drawbacks of it on the personal lives of celebrities. As a human being, every individual have privacy in their life, no one have right to interfere in the personal life of a person as well as celebrities. Here are some primary details for further explanation of this phenomenon.

No one is perfect, everybody have dark side in their lives. The luxuries life of celebrities which is now before us, perhaps at previous wasn’t like this, ups and downs are part of the life, highlighting those parts of a celebrity which may put wrong impact on their personal life, career and familiarity, is worst act. It should be condemn at high level. Even though, some magazines for the publicity and sell their magazines at large level, publish the wrong stories about the celebrities, they are usually false and don’t have any reality.

The media love to say that public has right to know. This is not the full fact. If the media informs us and keep us alert with current affairs and politics, even if they talk about the proficient life of celebrity, there wouldn’t be any prohibition, in fact, it’s a good approach, there isn’t any restriction at any level, but the majority of people may not be interested on the personal issues of any celebrity. Media should avoid interfering into personal matter of a celebrity.

Media pay too much heed to the personal life of public figures. The main reason is perhaps, they got jealous of their success. Celebrities are the icons and have fans. Sometimes, these rumors somehow, may be harmful for the future of a celebrity and ruin her career. It seems the media dig up these facts without giving thoughtful consideration to what might happen.

At last, no man is infallible. Interference on the personal life of a personality only for earning money and popularity is a cheep act in every prospective. It has negative drawbacks on the celebrity’s personal and familiarity.

TOEFL listening lectures: A lecture from a physical science class

[Katty2010]

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television, newspaper, magazines, and other media pay too much attention to the person lives of famous people such as public figures and celebration. Use specific reason and details to explain your opinion.

I fully support the statement that media is always trying to dig up the personal lives of celebrities. These TV channels and other source of media usually for enterprising and makING interesting their channels INTERESTING TO ATTRACT MORE VIEWERS and attract more and more people towards their channels dig up the past actions of the celebrities, without realizing the drawbacks of it on the personal lives of celebrities. As a human being, every individual haS A RIGHT OF privacy in their life, no one have right to interfere in the personal life of a person as well as celebrities. Here are some primary details for further explanation of this phenomenon.

No one is perfect, everybody haS A dark side in their lives. The luxurIOUS life of celebrities which is now before us, perhaps at previous wasn’t like this, ups and downs are part of the life, highlighting those parts of a celebrity which may put wrong impact on their personal life, career and familiarity, is worst act. It should be condemnED at high level. SOME MAGAZINES TO GAIN MORE PROFIT, Even though, some magazines for the publicity and sell their magazines at large level, publish the wrong stories about the celebrities, WHICH ARE they are usually false and don’t have any reality.

The media loveS to say that public has A right to know. This is not the full fact. If the media informs us and keep us alert with current affairs and politics, even if they talk about the proficient life of celebrity, there wouldn’t be any prohibition, in fact, it’s a good approach, there isn’t any restriction at any level, but the majority of people may not be interested on the personal issues of any celebrity. Media should avoid interfering into personal matter of a celebrity.

Media payS too much heed to the personal life of public figures. The main reason is perhaps, they gEt jealous of their success. Celebrities are the icons and have fans. Sometimes, these rumors somehow, may be harmful for the future of a celebrity and ruin her career. It seems the media dig up these facts without giving thoughtful consideration to what might happen.

At last, no man is infallible. Interference on the personal life of a personality only for earning money and popularity is a cheep act in every prospective. It has negative drawbacks on the celebrity’s personal LIFE.

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