Please help me reviewing my essay - I present the october 22 thanks

[Shinju15]

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People attend college or university for many reasons. Why do you think people atted college or university?

We have to consider that all the people do not wish to attend to college or university. There are some people that want to fulfill other types of carrier like arts and they need to attend to special school. Other people do not have the resources for attending college or university.

Separating these points, without doubt universities are a great source of knowledge that not only opens several opportunities but also prepares to you for the professional world.

Nowadays the professional world has become truly competitive and difficult, companies are searching for people with a well prepare background, diploma, master and Phd, the more knowledge your acquired more are the chance to find a suitable job, for these reason students consider attending to universities as an investment for the future.

On the other hand we need to consider that college or university do not bring only professional opportunities, it also gives you the opportunity of live a great experience were you can meet new people, develop social skill and learning how to face problems by yourself.

In conclusion college or university is an important decision that defines a lot of your future, a decision that have to be taking slightly a can bring a lot of advantage both in the present and in the future.

TOEFL listening lectures: A lecture from a life sciences class (4)

[Iris87]