essay for today. Need some help, Please. Thank you!

[Guangxi]

Do you agree or disagree with the point below?
Youth is wasted on the young.

We enjoy the free time and wonderful youth but in different way. I think if we have been done things with heart, we shouldn’t regret what we did before. I don’t think youth is wasted on the young.
We should do everything with our heart and enjoy what we have been down. I think if an elderly person who was given a chance to be young again. They would probably spend too much time fretting about time passing and whether or not they were make the most of it and enjoy every possible moment. Because young people don’t know how valuable of the youth it is, they can enjoy young.

If you have had time to regret what you haven’t done before, then why don’t you do it now? Never say never and later is better than never. Like my writing skills would be different if I wrote an essay every day in the past two years. I am nor regret I had have done it, because I spend my youth in the different way, I enjoyed what I did before and I am starting to write my essay every day. I don’t know what I will think about myself now, but one thing I know for sure is I enjoyed my youth.

Life is like a lesson; we can’t learn everything at one time. If we only knew then what I know now? Because we don’t know what will happen, life becomes interesting and we try very hard to reach our gold. The situation will be changed in different way. No one can say he/she can achieve his/her achievements in the path which is they thought.

Youth doesn’t depend on age. What’s the age for young? 100 years old people will say 50 years old is young, 50 years old will say 25 years is young. We should enjoy our life no matter how old we are. We can roll over on the hill or we can slide at a playground if we want to. There is no age limits for study or go to school.

TOEFL listening lectures: Which designer did not work at the Bauhaus?

[Justin_Huang]

Hi Guangxi,

I revised some words from your essay according to my knowledge. I believe there is still a lot of space to improve it. Good luck.

Justin

[Katty2010]

We enjoy the free time and wonderful youth but in different wayS. I think if we have been done things with heart, we shouldn’t regret what we did before. I don’t think youth is wasted on the young.

We should do everything with our heart and enjoy what we have been doING. I think if an elderly person who was given a chance to be young again, HE/SHE would probably spend too much time fretting about time passing and whether or not they were make the most of it and enjoy every possible moment. Because young people don’t know how valuable of the youth it is, they can enjoy young.

If you have had time to regret what you haven’t done before, then why don’t you do it now? Never say never and later is better than never. Like my writing skills would HAVE BEEN different if I HAD wrote an essay every day in the past two years. I am noT regretING I had have done it, because I spend my youth in the different way, I enjoyed what I did before and I am starting to write my essay every day. I don’t know what I will think about myself now, but one thing I know for sure is I enjoyed my youth.

Life is like a lesson; we can’t learn everything at one time. If I only knew then what I know now? Because we don’t know what will happen, life becomes interesting and we try very hard to reach our gold. The situation will be changed in A different way. No one can say he/she can achieve his/her achievements in the WAY which is they thought.

Youth doesn’t depend on age. What’s the age for young? 100 years old people will say 50 years old is young, 50 years old will say 25 years is young. We should enjoy our life no matter how old we are. We can roll over on the hill or we can slide at a playground if we want to. There is no age limits for study or go to school.
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Great essay. Really like your points. But your sentence structure, tenses, and grammar need hard work. Read atleast one essay per day. Read story books or reader digest magazine. Goodluck!
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[Guangxi]

Thank you. I know I am not lonely.

[Cristina.ro]

Hello,

A mistake, I believe, which you both missed: