 #1 (permalink) Fri Oct 21, 2011 13:02 pm PLEASE EVALUATE MY ESSAY |
|
|
Hi im not that good in english...here i am presenting my essay for the topic "Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television, newspapers, magazines, and other media pay too much attention to the personal lives of famous people such as public figures and celebrities. Use specific reasons and details to explain your opinion."
In my view media is the most important thing now a days that makes people aware of the society they are living in. But they are becoming more competitive between one another and making people annoyed because of their work by paying attention to the celebrity life styles rather then concentrating on the problems of society. In the following paragraphs i will enumerate few reasons to support my opinion.
First and foremost, competition among newspapers and tv channels is the main reason to encourage these type of activites. If one channel focus on a celebrity lifestyle
and got famous by getting extra remuneration to display more adds,other channels also attracted towards the same to get more money. Than the other channel will go far beyond the celebrity's life style to get more viewers, So that they can get more money then the other.
Secondly,when a celebrity's personal pic or video dispalyed on tv's or newspaper's people will go mad about it and watch for hours with out changing the channel. So that the number of viewers increases and remuneration paid to adds also increases, which results in waste of time for viewers and growing money for news admins. Instead people should concentrate on increasing problems in society and what measures should be taken to regulate them.
Thirdly,people should realise that celebrity is also a comman man like them and interfering in their personal life may cause several problems for them. For instance,
a famous movie star in my community had a relationship with one of his movie producers daughter and they were dating for two years. But the media people wrote bad about themand she got depressed and commited suicide,which eventually resulted their broke-up.
To sum up,i would like to say that media should not consider about a celebrity's personal feelings which was not at all usefull to build a better society. Instead they
should consider raising problems in society like corruption,politics and growing drug edicts which were really problemetic in a doveloping country.
TOEFL listening lectures: An organism that generates internal heat is called what? |
|
 Briskyboy
New Member
Joined: 12 Oct 2011
Posts: 4
|
