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Recently many new cellphones were invented for people.We can call them "Smart phone",or "Do-it-all phone".People may do a lot of things by their phones.Such as sharing their mood anecdotes on Twitter or Facebook, or playing games on the phone.Although it's convenient to have a smart phone,it make people become more anxious and tense.People ususally feel "disconnect" when they are "offline".They are urgent to find out what happened to friends and what friends are doing.Even when there is a someone they are with is in the midst of the conservation with them,they are nervous to pull out their phones to check what has happend online.
In these days we spend more and more time on our cellphones.We spend less and less time socializing with our family or our friends.Sometimes you may find that a family is all together to have a dinner,and some members are always gazing at their small screens.Ironically the small item make people away from each other.It make people live easier but make people more standoffish.
The cellphone you carry around actually makes your life more convenient.There is a feeling common among people who are digitally hooked that, when it's just them and the real world and no screen, they are somehow cast adrift or cut off. "It's a sense of, 'What am I missing?'" But in truth, a strong case can be made that when a person lives too many hours a day in the digital universe, that is when he or she is really missing something -- missing the things that are taking place in the flesh-and-blood world.

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