i wanna help please

[Alw3rd]

hello
how r u?
miss gave us duty which is writing two essay .one essay it is about ( "The job market is getting more competitive than ever before." Describe.)
Needs 500 words written in four parts
I wrote twice but she tell wrong. It's difficult subject for me
I do not know how i wrote i I wanna help
Is it one can help me and write??
Please I need help
If there is one that can help me send me a Private Message
note: i try to speak and write english good

TOEFL listening discussions: A conversation between a professor and her student

[Beeesneees]

Hi and welcome to the forums.

It seems that you need more basic work than you have been provided if the above is an example of your current level of English. Please try to remember that it is not your fault that you have been set such a difficult task and don't be downhearted. You have done extremely well to be able to communicate your needs here and just need to keep trying. However, before you worry about complex ideas in an essay it seems you need to focus on basic grammar and sentence structure.

This is an example of how your message above would be correctly written:
Hello,
How are you?
Our teacher/tutor gave us the task of writing two essays. The first essay title is:
"The job market is getting more competitive than ever before." Describe.
It is a 500 word essay which needs to be written in four parts.
I wrote it twice but my teacher says it is wrong. It's a difficult subject for me.
I do not know how I should write it. I want help.
Can anyone help me to write it?
Please, I need help.
If there is anyone who can help me, please send me a Private Message.
Note: I try to speak and write English well.
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Cheers m' dears!

[Alw3rd]

thnx alot my dear
but sure i need help
anyone can write this essay??

[Katty2010]

Do a little research on internet and write on your own. :)
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[Alw3rd]

i did research but i didn't found

[Beeesneees]

'Research' doesn't mean 'look for the essay'.
It means 'read about things to do with the essay then write it yourself.

You won't learn anything if someone else writes it.
It could also be considered to be cheating or plagiarism if you pass it off as your work.

These words, used in your messages, do not exist in English:
thnx
alot
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