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Do you agree or disagree? Only people who earn a lot of money are successful
Money can buy anything! Money is the symbol of success! Some people might say it is true, some might not. However, almost everybody tries to earn as much as they can to live in this competitive world. In my point of view, although people who earn a lot of money can be named as a successful person, there are many people who are successful without earning a lot of money. I will give some examples of being successful person in other aspects.
First, many people put their best effort to make their work done and well. This can describe that they are successful in their job. Teacher is one good example. In Thailand, this job does not get high salary. However, teachers can teach and give student all knowledge and idea. Those students, in the future, can do something good to the world. This result come from being a good teacher. This can named the teachers,who put all effort to guide students, as successful persons.
Second, being a good father/mother, everybody want to have a good family. Even, you are a boy/girl in that family, you want to see the happiness in your own family. Each people have to do their best to keep everything goes to the right way. For example, father have to be a good leader, parent and husband at the same time. For people who can have a good family, this can be a successful person who they are looking for.
Last but not least, friend is very important to everyone. When we face a problem, we can discuss and help each other. When we have a good time, we share. Many people earn a lot of money, but have no one to talk to or no one to listen. No doubt if someone would say "friend will come after you rich". But here, I mean a good friend(trusted one), and you cannot buy. So, if you are sincere, honest and trusted, someone might think you have a successful relationship to others.
All in all, people who earn a lot of money can buy many things that can fulfill their dream; on the other hand, they cannot buy many things such as a great quality work, happy family and trusted friend. There are a lot more to judged who people are successful, and not just only people who earn a lot of money can only be.
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