Please check my essay!!!Thanks!

[Bloom68]

topic: Suggestions to make our Revision 5 class better
During learning English, we work on our four skills, listening, speaking, writing and reading. I made some helpful suggestions to improve our skills.
The first is vocabulary quiz. In depth, we specify part of vocabulary book, then we inquire our knowledge. In this way, not only the words which is perpetually forgotten will be memorized, but also we realize how to use the words in accurate situation.
The next is giving lecture. It is sufficient for improving English skills. We should search about a particular topic. Therefor,we read several researches. We use new words which is professional and especial for that subject. It is effective for writing. In matter of fact, more professional words you know, you will have better writing. Then we represent the speech fluently with correct pronunciation.
Still another is speaking with native speakers. It will be useful we go on trip and have discussions with native speakers. We will experience to have conversation with natives and test our speaking and listening skills.
The final is IELTS reading. Final exam is IELTS and the most hardship questions are related to reading sections. It is better to work on some IELTS readings during the term to know variety types of questions and strategies.
To conclude,this term needs a lot of efforts, but unfortunately I am busy as a bee! On the one hand I would like work on some of the skills in the class, but on the other hand practice makes perfect.

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[Katty2010]

During learning English, we work on our four skills, listening, speaking, writing and reading. I made some helpful suggestions to improve our skills.

The first is vocabulary quiz. In depth, we specify part of vocabulary book, then we inquire our knowledge. In this way, not only the words which ARE perpetually forgotten will be memorized, but we ALSO realize how to use the words in accurate situation.

The next is giving lecture. It is sufficient for improving English skills. We should search about a particular topic. Therefor,we read several researches. We use new words which ARE professional and especial for that subject. It is effective WAY for writing. In matter of fact, more professional words you know, you will have better writing. Then we represent the speech fluently with correct pronunciation.

Still another is speaking with native speakers. It will be useful IF we go on trip and have discussions with native speakers. We will GAIN experience BY HAVING to have conversationS with natives and HENCE ENHANCE our speaking and listening skills.

The final is IELTS reading. Final exam is IELTS and the most hardship questions are related to reading sections. It is better to work on some IELTS readings during the term to know variOUS types of questions and strategies.

To conclude,this term needs a lot of efforts, but unfortunately I am busy as a bee! On the one hand I would like work on some of the skills in the class, but on the other hand practice makes ONE perfect.

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[Bloom68]

thank you very much! :-)