Short answer essay please !

[Kelsiiee]

When I first started cheerleading I thought what most people would think; cute short uniforms, easy cheers, nothing to it. Boy, was I wrong. Now, I’m on varsity, , if I’m not at school, I’m at cheer. If I’m not home, I’m at cheer and if I’m not at cheer, I’m at home sleeping recovering from cheer. Those two minutes of dancing, stunting, motions, and cheering feel like the longest two minutes of my life. But after those two minutes are over and it’s announced your exhausted, hard working, skillful team won first place, that is when all those practices, frustrations, and getting up after falling brutally on the floor just go back and do the stunt again is absolutely and wholly worth it.

TOEFL listening discussions: A conversation between a professor and a student discussing a possibility

[Katty2010]

Nice. Long sentences though. Try to break them down a bit! :) By the way are you applying for TOEFL exam?
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