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[Fhejri]

Why has airplane changed people’s lives?

Because of lack of facilities, the life was full of difficulties in the past. The existence of some requirements was felt necessary due to the urbanism’s development. One of those was having a faster transportation vehicle. Therefore, the human tried to achieve his goals by inventing some simple vehicles namely monocycle, bicycle, primitive automobile, etc. The inventions have been being proceeded and completed for many years. Among the created vehicles, airplane was the most effective one on the people’s life. It affects world economy and communication. Also, its helpful effect marks undeniable.
The world economy has been affected a lot after airplane arrival. The most of businesses have changed as international one and they were not limited only in some countries. Nobody was worried about losing time. Because he was able to have his breakfast with his family and have dinner with his companies in another country. So, airplanes help countries very much to have a close relation in the economy.
In the past, each travel to other country might last more than two weeks. Then, a few people traveled to another country or around the world. Therefore, each nation could not get acquainted with other cultures, languages, foods, etc. By appearance the aircraft in transport system, the number of tourist incredible increased. In addition, the inland traveling rate has been raised unbelievably. Consequently, not only did people make familiar with culture of other parts of their country, but they also exchanged their culture with other nations.
It is undeniable that the airplane has some helpful effects. In some emergency situations such as earthquake, tesonami and flood, some rescue teams, equipment and food can be sent for damaged people as fast as possible. Furthermore, unavailable places can be accessible and be helped by using the airplane.
As a result, airplanes effect on human’s life much more significantly than other vehicles. It can help him to be everywhere he wants without wasting his valuable time. It can be helpful to make the globalization faster by exchanging different cultures due to traveling a lot. Finally, it can even play an integral role in surviving people.

TOEFL listening lectures: A university science lecture on Island Biogeography

[Katty2010]

DUE of lack of facilities, the life was full of difficulties in the past. The existence of some requirements was felt necessary due to the urbanism’s development. One of those was having a faster transportation vehicle. Therefore, the humanS tried to achieve This goals by inventing some simple vehicles namely moToRcycle, bicycle, primitive automobile, etc. The inventions have been being proceeded and completed for many years. Among the created vehicles, airplane was the most effective one on the people’s life. It affects world economy and communication. Also, its helpful effect marks undeniable.

The world economy has been affected a lot after airplane arrival. MANY The most of businesses have RECIEVED changed as international RECOGNITION ARE NO LONGER one and they were not limited only in some countries. Nobody was worried about losing time. Because he was able to have his breakfast with his family and have dinner with his companies in another country. So, airplanes help countries very much to have a close relation in the economy.

In the past, each travel to other country might HAVE lastED FOR more than two weeks. TheREFORE, ONLY a few people traveled to another country or around the world. Therefore, each nation could not get acquainted with other cultures, languages, foods, etc. By INTRODUCTION OF the aircraft in transport system, the number of tourist incredible increased. In addition, the inland traveling rate has been raised unbelievably. Consequently, not only did people GOT familiar with culture of other parts of their country, but they also exchanged their culture with other nations.

It is undeniable that the airplane has some helpful effects. In some emergency situations such as earthquake, tUSnami and flood, some rescue teams, equipment and food can be sent for damaged people as fast as possible. Furthermore, unavailable places can be accessible and be helped by using the airplane.

As a result, airplanes effectS on human’s life ARE much more significant than other vehicles. It can help PEOPLE TO TRAVEL ANYWHERE WITHOUT WASTING VALUABLE TIME him to be everywhere he wants without wasting his valuable time. It can be helpful to make the globalization faster by exchanging different cultures due to traveling a lot. Finally, it can even play an integral role in surviving people.

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