Test my grammer

[Kmilias]

Hai everyone,

Here I wrote small essay about recent tour in my country.please correct if any grammatical mistakes.

I and my family went for tour to the hill station in my country.We really enjoyed those moments we spent on tour.It was really nice experience.Everywhere greenary, cool weather refresh our minds and body.My kids were happy during our tour

I feel going on tour once in a year, give us the relax to the mind and it gives us energy for the work ahead.

[Sahid59]

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I appreciate your tour policy..... please keep it up....!!

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Sahid59

Better tomorrow with better English