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[Milaniyamiila]

You have decided to apply for a job as a Spanish instructor that was advertised in the April edition of the magazine Teaching Professional. This ad was posted by Mr John Sullivan, director of the Spanish department at The Language Institute of Great Britain in London, England. In your letter to Mr Sullivan:
• explain why you are writing
• describe your qualifications and experience
• explain how they can contact you
Write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
(Question taken from Kaplan IELTS 2009-2010 )
Dear Mr. John Sullivan,
Recently, I have encountered your advertisement about job position for Spanish instructor. I am very interested in this position and moreover, I believe that I am suited for this position due to my qualifications and experience.
The Spanish language is my native language and my knowledge of English is Advanced.
I graduated from the University of Languages in Madrid and got a degree in Spanish philology with excellence.
Since graduation the university I have been working in the University of languages in Paris teaching Spanish. I am also in charge of publishing student newspaper about Spain in the Spanish language. Recently, I have passed exam in Certification of Spanish Teacher and got high grades. I also had a positive experience in translation prospectus from Spanish into English.
I am sending you my CV and references from my present employer. If you have any question please do not hesitate to contact with me through my e-mail which is written in my CV.
I am looking for your reply,
Yours sincerely

TOEFL listening lectures: Which of the following is true of biological indicators?

[IELTSbuddy]

Hi,

Here is the corrected version. There were not too many errors.:

Dear Mr. Sullivan,

Recently, I encountered your advertisement about a position for a Spanish instructor. I am very interested in this job and, moreover, I believe that I am suited for this post due to my qualifications and experience.

Spanish is my native language and my knowledge of English is advanced. I graduated from the University of Languages in Madrid and got a degree in Spanish philology (not sure what this is?) with excellence.

Since graduating from the university, I have been working in the University of Languages in Paris teaching Spanish. I am also in charge of publishing a student newspaper about Spain in the Spanish language. Recently, I passed the Certification of Spanish Teacher exam and achieved high grades. I also had a positive experience in translation prospectus (not sure what you mean here) from Spanish into English.

I am sending you my CV and references from my present employer. If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact me through my e-mail which is written in my CV.

I am looking forward to your reply,

Yours sincerely


Overall, it was a good answer, so there is not much to add regarding the content.

You addressed the three bullet points in the question which is the most important thing, and expanded on them with some detail, and you remained on topic well.

You've demonstrated your ability to use complex sentence structures as there are a few in your writing.

There were a couple of things that I was not sure what you meant which I have underlined.

Let me know if there is anything you are not clear about.

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[Milaniyamiila]

Thank you

philology
- definition

V noun [uncountable] linguistics /fɪˈlɒlədʒi/

the scientific study of the history and development of languages or of a particular language

[Milaniyamiila]

Thank ypu for your answer
positive experience in translation prospectus (not sure what you mean here) from Spanish into English. IT MEANS THAT I ALSO HAVE TRANSLATED I MEAN I WORKED AS A TRANSLATOR and translated something which connected with Spanish

[Milaniyamiila]

I graduated from the University of Languages in Madrid and got a bachelor's degree in philology of the Spanish Language with excellence

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[Milaniyamiila]

Thank you

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That's ok, good luck with the test.
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