who will correct me ?

[Majed Maati]

Hi everyone,this my paragraph regarding daily work ,I would like to correct them by any instructor

In this morning ,I go early to the an institute,the class was start at 8:00am ,it was about an inspection safety requirements ,instructor was take for introduction and general overview about them. and he was requested homework regarding this subject

please show me all mistake and why.

alot of thanks .

[Beeesneees]

You have spacing errors throughout your work. A space always follows a full stop, comma, etc. rather than precedes it.
You have used the wrong tenses in many places.

This is a corrected version of your paragraph. There may seem to be a lot of errors, but don't be disheartened. You were able to write in English clearly enough for me to understand. That's really good.

Please examine the differences in your paragraph and mine, then you are welcome to ask about any corrections I've made where you don't understand how you went wrong.

Hi everyone, this is my paragraph regarding daily work, I would like to correct them have it corrected by any instructor.

In this the morning, I go early to the an institute, the class was start starts at 8:00am. Today, it was about an inspection safety requirements, the instructor was take for introduction introduced the topic and gave a general overview about them. and he was He requested homework regarding this subject.

Please show me all mistakes and explain why they are wrong.

A lot of thanks.
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Cheers m' dears!

[Majed Maati]

Thanks my teacher .

[Majed Maati]

my teacher
can i write other one ?