GRE® issue about curriculum

[Wal615]

Educators should find out what students want included in the curriculum and offer it to them?

I have many ideas about this statement, but following is only one of them. I think that this short passage is able to represent my ability of writing(grammar, thinking style and logic).
so please give me some advice and thank you for your time!

I concede that educators including the people who are experts in making the material, should understand what the context of the books students want, because this is a factor of that education process is interesting to students and then the result of education is effective. As educators who make the books for students, if they only focus on what knowledge is useful and pay no attention on students’ interesting and demands, the materials would be no more than a boring book without interesting, which would lead to the antipathy to learning among the students—the obstacle preventing students from being educated. But if the educators can include what they want in the books, they will make learning an interesting experience. The math book for primary students could be a good example. the book without boring words introducing math formula fills with color pictures and many stories in which there are some question which could be answered by using the math.These factors would what children want and make knowledge of math interesting to students so that they want to learn without boring.