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Short annotation to be corrected. #1 (permalink) Wed Jan 04, 2012 7:29 am   Short annotation to be corrected.
 

The ensemble 'Moris-trio' ,named for outstanding French composer of twentieth century, was created in 2010. The creative ideology of the ensemble is the development of the best Russian and West-european school of instrumental and chamber performing art in a progressive flow of modernity.
For the short period since the ensemble was created, it has had successful performances on the best stages of large music festivals in Sweden ("Aurora Chamber Music Festival") and Holland ("The Holland Music Sessions"). The ensemble studied under the supervision of outstanding musicians such as...

Could you check this in terms of grammar, adequacy and style? Thank you!
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Short annotation to be corrected. #2 (permalink) Wed Jan 04, 2012 8:15 am   Short annotation to be corrected.
 

I can't grasp the intended meaning of the underlined part, sorry.

The ensemble 'Moris-Trio' ,named after an outstanding French composer of the twentieth century, was created in 2010. The creative ideology of the ensemble is the development of the best Russian and Western European schools of instrumental and chamber performing art in a progressive flow of modernity.
In the short period since the ensemble was created, it has been successful on the stages of the best large music festivals in Sweden ("Aurora Chamber Music Festival") and Holland ("The Holland Music Sessions"). The ensemble studied under the supervision of outstanding musicians such as...
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Short annotation to be corrected. #3 (permalink) Wed Jan 04, 2012 8:19 am   Short annotation to be corrected.
 

Thank you, Bee!!!! I'm so much grateful ! That's not my text, I can't comment on the underlined part.(
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Short annotation to be corrected. #4 (permalink) Wed Jan 04, 2012 8:35 am   Short annotation to be corrected.
 

Possibly this would make more sense, but it's only a guess:
The creative ideology of the ensemble is the development of the best Russian and Western European schools of instrumental and chamber music, performing art in a progressive flow of modernity.

To me, "a progressive flow of modernity." sounds like an attempt at a flowery, arty style of language which simply doesn't make too much sense.
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