Sentence constructions shown in the listening transcript

[Bhikkhu1991a]

Hello,

Could you please ascertain whether you agree with me about my opinion on the subject of the sentence constructions shown in the listening transcript? As far as I am concerned, the first sentence and the two immediate so-called sentences should make up one complete sentence—that is, there are no full stops before the words “Like” and “Or” nor capital letters for the words “Like” and “Or”.

Here is an excerpt from the listening transcript:

Listening Comprehension Transcript

It seems like flat tires come at the worst possible times. Like the middle of a crowded freeway. Or a deserted road late at night. But now a flat tire doesn't have to ruin your trip. Due to revolutionary new technology, Ruble Tires let you…

TOEIC listening part IV, set 14, exercise 8

http://www.english-test.net/toeic/listening/advertising_car_tyres_on_the_radio.html

Thank you.

Best wishes,
Bhikkhu1991a.

[Dozy]

The sentence structure is OK. It gives the narrative a particular stylistic feel -- sort of "bright and breezy". This style would be too chatty for a very formal text, but it works fine here.

[Bhikkhu1991a]

Hello Dozy,

Many thanks for sharing your invaluable information.

Happy New Year!

Best wishes,
Bhikkhu1991a.