Question about writing. Is this correct ?

[Samy]

Dear …………

I truly appreciate your help and taking time for evaluating my request and wish you every success with your studies and the best of luck in your life.

I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Sincerely,
……….

[Luschen]

I would prefer "taking time to evaluate". The sentence is also a little "stringy" (a term I learned here :) ). So, I would split it into two sentences after "request".

[Samy]

Thank you my friend for your Help , Could you Please give me an example and tell me how to split it into two sentences after "request". :)

[Beeesneees]

Just use a full stop and 'I' instead of the word 'and':

I truly appreciate your help and taking time to evaluate my request. I wish you every success with your studies and the best of luck in your life.
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Cheers m' dears!

[Samy]

Again my Great teacher Madam Beeesneees :)Thank You for your Help ... .I really love you from the bottom of my heart . Best of British :)