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 WHAT'S HAPPENING IN FRANCE?
     Recently, French government has made a decision about event of 1915. This decision impedes the right to express. Freedom of expression means that people can express freely their ideas in every field. This is one of the most basic right for people so that no one can not impede right to express of anybody.

         Freedom of expression has started to exist with act of reform and this act prepeared a suitable atmosphere for French Revolution. After the French Revolution, freedom of expression permeated as a flow of thought that was named liberalizm all over the world. This caused to change political structure of the world. Some splendid empires collapsed for example Ottoman Empire and Austria-Hungaria Empire. In addition, this movement of thought led to exist USA as a new super power of the world in place of collapsed empires

          Nowadays French goverment's attitude about event of 1915 is shown that they are acting against what they defended before so a substantial part of the world can not understand French goverment's intention about event of 1915. In according to some journalist, Sarkozy, who is head of the french goverment, is planning to be elected again. Therefore, he wants to enhance the number of his supporter. Hence, he tries to affect  Ermanian electors by restricting citizen's freedom of expression.

     Sarkozy damaged bedrock of French Republic for his individual ambition at the same time French is losing  prestige by acting against own core values. France should turn back from this wrong decision and repair all fault that it is caused.

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