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136. Some high schools require all students to wear school uniforms. Other high schools permit students to decide what to wear to school. Which of these two school policies do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

There are many types of high school. Every high school has some policies. For instance, some high schools require all students to wear uniform, in contrast, others high schools permit students to decide what to wear to school. In my opinion, schools should permit students decide what to wear to school. When I was a high school, it was a big controversy between students and teachers.

First off all, If students want to be successful, they should concentrate their lesson. But sometimes their school uniform can prevent to concentrate lesson. Because of uncomfortable schools uniform, students can face some problems. For instance, some schools use one kind school uniforms. Therefore, students obligate to wear these uniforms every season. One type of uniform can cause to be hot in the summer or it can cause be cold in the winter. Thus school uniforms can be cause illness. Moreover, schools uniform is not comfortable. For this reason lot of students do not want to wear school uniform.

Secondly, schools uniforms are usually old fashioned. It is usually contain that tie, jacket and classic pants. According to students, it is so monotonous and they think, it looks like big man's costume. Students want to wear independently and this is their right. They want to show their style and student's styles are developing in high school. Also when schools management restrict student like this policy, it can cause delinquency. So students can disregard the rules.

To sum up, schools should permit students to decide what to wear to school and students should wear independently in high school. In my opinion, school uniforms is very useless for student.

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