Are these correct?

[Jimmyduh]

Hello I need to know, whether these sentences corect. And why?
1. The boy in red shirt is riding a bicycle.(in red shirt)
2. Jessica, the girl wih the bun is watching television. (with the bun)
3. Jamie, the girl who has a ponytail is baking some cookies. (who has a ponytail)
4. Jamie, the girl who has a short hair is baking some cookies. (who has ahort hair)

[IELTSbuddy]

Hello I need to know, whether these sentences corect. And why?
1. The boy in the red shirt is riding a bicycle.(in red shirt)
2. Jessica, the girl with the bun, is watching television. (with the bun)
3. Jamie, the girl who has a ponytail, is baking some cookies. (who has a ponytail)
4. Jamie, the girl who has short hair, is baking some cookies. (who has ahort hair)

As you can see from my corrections, you are missing commas in some - these are non-defining relative clauses (extra information) so commas are needed. You correctly put it after the first noun but not after the relative clause.

Couple of mistakes with articles as well.
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[Jimmyduh]

thank you