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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The invention of the Internet has had negative effects on your civilization. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Some people think that the Internet has a lot of negative points; such facilitating the piracy or conveying improper material to children. However, in my opinion, the effect of the invention Internet on the civilization is more positive than harmful. Because, this invention allow people communicate better, become some tasks easier and help spread information.
I believe that the Internet is an important tool to enhance the relationship and communication between the people. Once, people the live far away might communicate for Skype, messenger, Facebook and so on. For example, consider a student that study abroad. Through these tools, he is able to talk with his parents and friends. In the past, this communication was very hard, because a call to a different country is much expensive.
Moreover, due the Internet we can do some tasks faster and easier than before. For instance, currently, we are able to banking and pursue a degree online. Doing these things on the Internet, we waste less time in lines or in the traffic. Furthermore, studying online is easier for the students getting a degree and work at same time. Since their schedule in online course is more flexible.
Finally, it's my belief that Internet help spread information. I think that it's very good. For example, before, the books were the only source of subjects for the students. It was a problem if they didn't have enough money to buy them or couldn't borrow from the library. Also, it was common have outdated information in them. Currently, we may study online and read recent researches in databases for free.
To sum up, the Internet has more advantages than disadvantages. Therefore, I disagree that it has had negative effects on the civilization. The Internet provides us a better communication, become our life easier and improve the access to the information.

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