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[Yolchuyev]

Some famous athletes and entertainers earn millions of dollars every
year. Do you think these people deserve such high salaries? Use
specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Money is the thing that we pay or paid for our needs or work and everybody earns a specific amount of money instead of his/her work. Whose work is more important than others they earn much more money than other people. So in that way I think that those athletes or entertainers work so much and earn those millions which they really deserve.
Firstly we know that any product that has a big demand in society brings a lot of profit for businesses and maybe for the inventors of those products. In that way the millions of fans could also be considered as consumers and those celebreties as successful products that bring a lot of benefit for themselvs. More clearly, all those people playing football, music, films, etc. serve for the rest and colorful lives of billions of people and earns those reasonable amounts of money.
Also although they are usually seen in trendy clothes and cars I think they are also having many problems and tired, stressful times in that job. Because of their business very often they can not form their personal lives as they want as other people. There is a good saying in our culture about such people that "Art needs a victim" So I believe that they are working for people and in that way they lose their own peace and comfort. So to manage all those lacks in their lives that large amount of money is too much for them and a long with that money I think they need a public esteem.
Eventually, I think that celebrities serving for a large society and their work is really hard so they deserve those large amonts of money, moreover a positive public appreciation. Don't you want to watch fotball derbies or latest moves, etc? So do not think that they earn extra money, just repect them.

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