Please, check another one independent essay!

[Maria1212]

Could you grade, please, this essay (from 0-6).

When students move to a new school, they sometimes face problems. How can schools help these students with their problems ? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.

Many students often face problems when they transfer to a new school. It might take a long time for them to get familiar with the new environment. Thus, schools can help students by conducting orientation courses, appointing an advisor and organizing various events to overcome their problems.
First of all, transferred students may face problems adapting to their new environment. A school should offer orientation courses to new enrolles in order to help them understand expectations of the school as well as rules and regulations. In addition, students should become familiarized with building locations and important campus services. Being familiar with the system of the school helps students to adjust more easily to the new environment.
Secondly, when a student transfers to another school he often finds himself lost in a large amount of information. Therefore, schools should have advisory services that assist new students with all needed information. Moreover, if students have any difficulties with their studies they should give them advice and help to solve problems.
Lastly, making new friends and developing a social life may be another problem of a student’s transition. In this case, a school should encourage students to participate in different activities. For example, a school can organize special meetings, conferences and parties. Paricipating in these activities gives students a chance to interact with each other. As a result, it allows them to adapt better.
In conclusion, there are many things a school can do to help their new students, such as providing orientation and adisory services as well as organizing different events. If schools help students, they will face less difficulties in their new lives.

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[Luschen]

Wow, one of the best essays I've read in awhile. Only a couple misspelled words and a missing article or two, but I don't think that would keep this essay from scoring a 6 out of 6.

[Maria1212]

Thank you!

[Mofan522]

god job!