#2 (permalink) Tue Feb 07, 2012 5:25 am Re: Good teachers set challenging tasks for the students. Please check it |
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Hi, I enjoyed reading your essay. Please see my comments and suggestions below.
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Good teachers set challenging tasks for the students.
It is undeniable that the role of teachers is very important on children lessons{this doesn't sound right - the teachers are not important to the lessons, they are important to their students or to their students' learning of the lessons}. Every teacher tends{"strives" sounds better} to improve the knowledge of their students. Some of them set easy task[s ] to encourage their student while others set difficult assignment[s ]. I believe that good teachers should set challenging taks for several reasons. I will explain my viewpoint with the following paragraphs.{try to give short summaries of your reasons in the thesis statement}
First of all, I would like to emphasize that teachers always attempt to encourage their students to improve their skills. {your first reason should be here instead of this repetitive sentence} {Maybe "First of all, assigning difficult problems can nurture students' creativity" then continue on with your explanation.} For these reasons they give difficult assignments that are hard to solve. For solving these problems students should use their creativity and they should find several ways get the solution. In this way their creativity is going to improve and after solving some of difficult tasks their brain[s ] begin to work clearly and they solve problems easier than they do{"did" or just "easier than before"} before. Moreover, by the searching [for] new solution ways{"methods" sounds better} students learn to look [at] each problem from different angle[s ] and they see all disadvantages[the facets] of any problem. Thus, they are also going to be successful in solving their daily problems.
Furthermore, I would like to highlight that challenging tasks are very important for concentrating[improving the concentration] of students. {this is a good topic sentence}{"concentrating of students" would be putting 200 in each classroom ;) }They are[This is] important because when they solve difficult homework they relax and feel happy. For example, when I was studying in high school I was interested in math. My teacher was a great teacher and he used to give us difficult tasks. I was spending much time to solve these problems. When I found the solution of these tasks I was very happy and felt relax[ed ]. And I felt that by[with] the helping of solving these problems I developed[improved in] my other subjects which I did not like. Besides, I beileve{sp} that if teachers do not give challenging assignment[s ] most student will not interested in subject and they will be lazy.
To sum up, I strongly beileve that good teachers set difficult homework and all teachers should do it. It is important make students to interest[interested in] the subject. Some teachers cannot teach their field interestingly. So by the giving challenging tasks and by solving these problems during the lesson they can make their lesson more interesting than they do regularly. {try to avoid using "interesting" so often}
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