please review my essay ! thanks in advance .

[Mofan522]

Agree or disagree the most important characteristic for a politician or a leader is good communication skill.
2012 is a significant year, since numerous presidential elections will take place in different corner of the world, such as : France , The US, Japan , China , Russia, etc. speeches from the presidential campaign attract millions of spectators. In my opinion, a charming politician always has his/her own instrument to transmit opinions to public and incite voters. This skill is necessary and primordial for candidates to win the election and also to promote their policy .
First and foremost, a good communication skill makes the politicians and their politics well known. For instance, several politicians try to popularize their way of speaking to provide people a better understanding, or they use their humor and some funny presentations in order to make the speeches impressive. As the result, the repercussion among the people will be stronger. Obviously , more people pay attention to what the politicians said, they are surer to win .
Secondly and equal importantly , a efficient communication can reduce misunderstandings. In my experience, misunderstanding is worse than that we do nothing at all . Because the politician can hardly handle the situation :once their make a claim public , it is impossible to correct and neutralize what they have said. For example , The mayor of a city tend to reduce the number of traffic accidents by publishing: slow down or you will be killed ! This slogan is not persuasive at all , moreover the government's reputation will receive a irreparable damage.
In conclusion, a good communication skill is crucial . Because it can not only enable the politician to conquer more agreements , but also help them to avoid side effects due to the misunderstandings .

TOEFL listening discussions: What is the main weakness of the student's essay?

[Luschen]

Hi, you have written another good essay. Skills, like communication skills, business skills, etc are usually plural unless you are talking about one specific skill. I really liked your introduction and your essay was very easy to follow.

[Mofan522]

Because the politician can hardly handle the situation :once their make a claim public {this phrase is confusing to me} , it is impossible to correct and neutralize what they have said. --> i want to say : one the politician makes several wrong our non suitable explication in their speeches , he or she can hardly correct and neutralize what they said in the past. thanks Luschen !