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 #2 (permalink) Wed Feb 08, 2012 5:29 am Re: Is this sentence ok, if not, please correct it. |
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| Arthur Yg wrote: |
Dear Sirs
Please correct the content whatever is necessary.
"Customers might have more than one SDK/CGI for their camera product line. In such [a] scenario they either must have the integration capability [themselves] or seek assistance from [a] third party in order to get seamless integration across all SDKs/CGIs. The standard engineer[ing] fee for such integration is USD2,000 per SDK/CGI once both parties foresee the[that] further cooperation is promising." {This is correct, but sounds a little odd. Do you mean perhaps "once both parties agree on further cooperation" or "once both parties foresee that further cooperation is necessary"? |
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 Luschen
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| #3 (permalink) Wed Feb 08, 2012 5:43 am Re: Is this sentence ok, if not, please correct it. |
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Thanks for the correction, Luschen.
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| {This is correct, but sounds a little odd. Do you mean perhaps "once both parties agree on further cooperation" or "once both parties foresee that further cooperation is necessary"? |
Will this be more explicit?
"once both parties consider that further cooperation is profitable after evaluation/feasibility study"
best regards, |
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Arthur Yg
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| #4 (permalink) Wed Feb 08, 2012 14:01 pm Is this sentence ok, if not, please correct it. |
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| So the two parties agree to cooperate on a evaluation/feasiblility study and at that point the customer pays you $2000, correct? If so I would just say "... once both parties agree to cooperate on the project." It is obvious to me that they would not agree unless they thought it was promising or could be profitable. |
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Luschen
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| #5 (permalink) Thu Feb 09, 2012 3:02 am Is this sentence ok, if not, please correct it. |
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| Yes, and thank you very much, Luschen. |
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Arthur Yg
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| correct sentence | swim/swimming/swam ? |
