#2 (permalink) Fri Feb 10, 2012 0:12 am Re: please check my presentation |
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Hi, not too many mistakes to find in this passage. Very nice! If is prose, make sure to put periods after all of your sentences.
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I hope help me to correct my mistakes please check my presentation
smile Today I want to talk about the language which does not need to translate[translation], is the most beautiful thing in the world, and [is] a weapon of life and mind, even is the key to the hearts, does not cost anything, does not take more than a trice, but its impact penetrates the hearts. And breaks barriers with human beings, A smile has the power to make other people feel good about themselves. It’s heart-warming and has the power to cheer up others instantly A smile is the universal welcome. A smile is an inexpensive way to change your looks. A smile costs nothing but gives much Always remember to be happy because you never know who's falling in love with your smile. Life is like a mirror, we get the best results when we smile at it. The shortest distance between two people is a smile If you don't start out the day with a smile, it's not too late to start practicing for tomorrow. Beauty is power; a smile is its sword Peace begins with a smile A smile is a powerful weapon; you can even break ice with it A smile is something you can't give away; it always comes back to you A smile is a sign of trust A smile is a sign of joy and hope Every time you smile at someone, it is an action of love, a gift to that person, a beautiful thing.
[A] smile expresses many meanings Joy and happiness – self-confidence - love and affection
Conclusion In short, a smile [is an] international language, [it] is the same in Japan, India, Middle East, Europe, and America so we don't need [a] dictionary to translate [it] |
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