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this is my essay for integrate writing , please review it , thanks! #1 (permalink) Tue Feb 14, 2012 11:54 am   this is my essay for integrate writing , please review it , thanks!
 

In this set of material , the reading passage presents some advantages of the fire suppression as an advancement of the wilderness management. However , the professor disputes these arguments.
To begin with , the professor point out that fires help forests to keep a long term stability. Because fires reduce the number of mature plants and make new plants and native plant competitive and grow with more light. This casts doubt on the point in the reading passage that the fire suppression improve the health of trees.
The professor also claim that the increase of the deer population, sometimes, do harm to plants who are closed to the ground . because they eat the leaves of these trees. Fires help the forest in controlling the numbers of the animals . This would seem to challenge the argument in the reading passage that the fire suppression is necessary to protect animal's population.
The professor finishes by asserting that , even though the opinion in the reading passage is correct that burning decreases the overall amount of nutrients in the soil, the burning can also help release more types of nutrients . The more various nutrients do well to the forest development.

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this is my essay for integrate writing , please review it , thanks! #2 (permalink) Tue Feb 14, 2012 12:07 pm   this is my essay for integrate writing , please review it , thanks!
 

hi my friend in this forum , I want to transmit my listening resource of this writing section on the net and share the resource with you all . but i don't know how to proceed it ! can you help me? thanks in advance!
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this is my essay for integrate writing , please review it , thanks! #3 (permalink) Tue Feb 14, 2012 16:40 pm   this is my essay for integrate writing , please review it , thanks!
 

Can you just post the link for the listening resource?
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