 Wed May 31, 2006 9:59 am TOEFL essay sample: Parents are the best teachers... |
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Hi abbildung,
My comments are in CAPITALS:
| Quote: | Nowadays a good education is one of the most imporant factors for anyoe who wants to
successfully handle all the competitions occurRing in once/ONE /YOUR lifetime. In this essay i want
to explain why i think parents are the best teachers among all educators.
Children spend the/MOST OF most of their time during the childhood with their parents. Thus
parents can influence and teach their children like no other person can do. When children join /GO TO SCHOOL
the school they already have received their basic knowledge and the teachers at school have to
put their expertise upon/ON TOP OF this basic knowledge.
Since children spend so much time with their children and their naturally given respect for
their parents they will listen carefully to their parents advices/ADVICE. Usually no other person will
ever be able to get a similar level of authority like parents have.
Probably the most important point that makes parents the best teachers is their love to/FOR the children.
This love will lead to a great devotion while they teach their children making them the most
patient teacher one can imagine.
Because of all these points i think parents are the best teachers and can even teach their
children better than any professional educator with a lot of expertise. |
Alan
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