 #2 (permalink) Wed Jul 26, 2006 8:26 am TOEFL essay sample: Will the mouse eat books? |
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| Quote: | Will the mouse eat books?
When I was a child I (was) lived in my village. One day I found my favorite book on/IN small pieces. I was crying. Then my grandmother said TO me: The mouse eat/HAS EATEN your book. But I will buy you a new one....
Now I am a woman. Every day I am going/GO to work. I have not time to read books.Everything in my job and in my homework I am doing/DO with my computer.
Millions OF people every day work with computers. Nowadays THE Internet is AN importaint part of our life. Now we have a different type OF "mouse" -A computer mouse. She is more beautiful from/THAN the mouse from my childhood.And now I like it.
Maybe a computer mouse will "eat" the book,but not at all. The computer mouse cannot give me a chance to to touch the history of my country. I cannot get a real emotions/EMOTION from opening something written before many years/MANY YEARS AGO.
For me books will be interesting (in) all my life.
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Alan
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