#2 (permalink) Wed Jul 26, 2006 8:21 am TOEFL essay sample: Men or women are they better drivers? |
|
|
Hi,
Please note that the plural of man is MENand the plural of woman is WOMEN I have made other changes in CAPITAL letters.
Quote: | Men or women are they better drivers?
Nowadays there is a "war" between mans and womans/MEN AND WOMEN. The mans/MEN think that they are stronger and better from womans/WOMEN. There is one most popular debate. The mans or womans are the better drivers? The mans think that (the) womans are not (a)good drivers. But I do not think so.
Everyone knows that the man/MEN do not like a driving womans/WOMEN DRIVERS. They think that the womans have not enought/ENOUGH sense of orientation and (a) good reflexes to be drivers. (The) mans think that many accidents are (throught) THE woman"s fault. Is this a mit/MYTH or reality?
My opinion is that driving doES not depends from/ON the sex OF THE DRIVER. I think that (a) good driving depends only from/ON YOUR driving experience and from/ON YOUR personal culture (of each person). Everyone experiensed/ANY EXPERIENCED driver will be better from/THAN a new one. (The) mans do not want to believe that womans can do everything like a mans/MAN. I do not think that the womans are stronger than mans, but I do not think that I cannot be a good driver only because I am a woman.
But the "war" between mans and womans will continue as LONG AS the world turns. Not only for driving.... |
Alan _________________ English as a Second Language You can read my ESL story Present Simple |
|
Alan Co-founder

Joined: 27 Sep 2003 Posts: 17284 Location: UK
|