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Personal Pronouns (Unit 1) | Days, Months etc. (Unit 12)
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introduce myrself #1 (permalink) Wed May 22, 2013 15:37 pm   introduce myrself
 

my name is fadel
> i am 21 years old
> i am a single
> i will graduate next week
> i am interested to work with you in your company
> i like to watch movies in free time
>
>
>
> i usually get up at about 8:30 and first thing i do is switch the radio
> and listen to omkolthom , then i start my car to go to my job ,my job take
> about 30 minutes to arrive to the building ,my job is in technical support
> department , so i have to go to the employees offices to check what is the
> problem and then i try to fix it in their offices if the problem is hard i
> have to take it to the workshop and fix the ,for example some times i sow
> that the employee is bulge the printer to the wrong electricity power
>
>
> please evaluate me so i can know what is my mistakes
Fadell
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introduce myrself #2 (permalink) Fri May 24, 2013 22:10 pm   introduce myrself
 

Ok, I'm not an expert, but I do have some tips for you:

* Even if you're practicing, try to always use Capital letters and punctuations when starting and finishing a sentence, respectively. This will improve your writing skills and will save you some time if you're preparing for an international exam, where evaluators DO consider these mistakes as a serious problem.
* "I will graduate next week" sounds kinda weird (at least for me). If you ask me, I'd use "I will get my bachelor's degree next week".
* "I like to watch movies in MY free time".

"i usually get up at (about) 8:30 and thefirst thing i do is turn onthe radio
> and tun in to omkolthom station?. Then i start the engine ofmy car to go to work ,I take
> about 30 minutes to arrive to the building .I work in the technical support
> department , so i have to go to the employees' offices to check if there is a problemand then i try to fix it in their offices. If the problem is hard, I
> have to take it to the workshop and fix it . For example, sometimes i saw (or noticed)
> that an employee is bulge I don't know that word.. I would use 'has pluged'the printer's power cord into the wrong electricity power (you can use 'outlet', sounds better to me)".

Don't forget to always use punctuation when needed. Keep working and good luck!.

BR,
Marco.
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