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collecting criminals across the city #1 (permalink) Sun Apr 20, 2014 16:09 pm   collecting criminals across the city
 

Could any one write a better sentence instead of

Some governments build prisons to collecting criminals across the city while some.....

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collecting criminals across the city #2 (permalink) Sun Apr 20, 2014 16:37 pm   collecting criminals across the city
 

Prisons don't collect prisoners.
What is the rest of the sentence?
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collecting criminals across the city #3 (permalink) Sun Apr 20, 2014 16:48 pm   collecting criminals across the city
 

I am trying to write a essay about different ways of decreasing crime rate in societies and intended to say just builing taugher and bigger prisons does not work to collect criminals across the cities.
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collecting criminals across the city #4 (permalink) Sun Apr 20, 2014 21:08 pm   collecting criminals across the city
 

Then use 'hold' rather than 'collect'.
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