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Torsten Learning Coach

Joined: 25 Sep 2003 Posts: 17788 Location: EU
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#48 (permalink) Thu Sep 04, 2008 10:07 am Native speakers wanted! |
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Torsten wrote: | Hi Molly, I think you are saying this because you will never be able to speak like Brandee. |
That's a rather odd thought, T, if I may say so. You asked for opinions and now you want only those which suit you and your goals, right? Do you agree with Lost Soul regarding Brandee sounding "unrealistic"?
And why would I want to speak like Brandee anyway? |
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Molly I'm a Communicator ;-)
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#49 (permalink) Thu Sep 04, 2008 15:40 pm Native speakers wanted! |
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Molly wrote: | Do you agree with Lost Soul regarding Brandee sounding "unrealistic"?
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Actually, I'm afraid I have to take back my words. After I made that statement, I have discovered lots of Brandee's recordings on this site and in most of them she's quite fast and uses lots of phrasal verbs and slang, so now I cannot say she sounds "unrealistic". |
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Lost_Soul I'm a Communicator ;-)

Joined: 15 Sep 2006 Posts: 1861 Location: South Park, Colorado, USA
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#50 (permalink) Thu Sep 04, 2008 16:20 pm Native speakers wanted! |
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lost_soul wrote: | Actually, I'm afraid I have to take back my words. After I made that statement, I have discovered lots of Brandee's recordings on this site and in most of them she's quite fast and uses lots of phrasal verbs and slang, so now I cannot say she sounds "unrealistic". |
I was referring to your original comment and that particular recording. That's the one Torsten, seemed, to want feedback on. |
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Molly I'm a Communicator ;-)
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Torsten Learning Coach

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#52 (permalink) Thu Sep 04, 2008 16:46 pm Native speakers wanted! |
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Torsten wrote: | We would like to collect feedback on all the recordings we have on our site. |
Great. I'll give a few more a listen.
Let's hope you haven't got more insults up your sleeve, eh?
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Quote: | Hi Molly, I think you are saying this because you will never be able to speak like Brandee. |
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Molly I'm a Communicator ;-)
Joined: 12 Feb 2008 Posts: 4017
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#53 (permalink) Thu Sep 04, 2008 17:11 pm Native speakers wanted! |
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hi Torsten
As I have a busy schedule I could only get back to you now on your point concerning me taking over from the Okie.
I think the problem is two fold, in that trainers often have a version bias, and therefore do not think to include various listening exercises in their lessons from different sources.
Also the learners take for granted the challenge of a rounded learning process, that goes hand in hand with reliance on the trainer for the audio material, and thus listening exercises.
If you combine both of the above the result is a learner who really has a very thin self learning system, and not very effective input. The result is a one dimensional learner who is confident in the safe, familiar environment of the classroom but outside of this box has little diversity. _________________ Please meet Stewart Tunncilff |
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Stew.t. I'm here quite often ;-)

Joined: 14 Dec 2006 Posts: 561 Location: Leipzig, Germany
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#54 (permalink) Thu Sep 04, 2008 18:58 pm Native speakers wanted! |
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Guys,
It's important to consider the speaker's level. Brandee surely speaks to fast for A2 learners (except when she introduces the piece of writing), and the exercise here is clearly addressed to A2 learners. If you feel like learning Spanish or Russian or Chinese, you don't want to listen to someone who reads at a speed of 60 pagers per hour; the natural speed of someone who has read an easy script many times before recording it.
Read it as if you had to make sense of it yourself while reading it, then your intonation will improve and your speed decrease in a natural way. _________________ Test of English as a Foreign Language TOEFL Preparation & TOEFL Vocabulary Learn more: How to Become an English Teacher |
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Ralf Language Coach

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#55 (permalink) Fri Sep 05, 2008 0:18 am Native speakers wanted! |
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I thought the three voices (Brandee, Martin, Stew) worked well in combination.
I wonder whether it would be useful for ESL students to have three versions of each text.
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MrPedantic I'm a Communicator ;-)
Joined: 13 Oct 2006 Posts: 1326 Location: Southern England
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#56 (permalink) Fri Sep 05, 2008 2:07 am Brandee's Readings |
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Hello All! :D
Thank you for your feedback. I am not an English teacher. I own a marketing company and am a world traveler. I came across this site while seeking "speaking" jobs. This is not my written material, so any "slang" or "phrasal verb" usage is not my own. I am reading text. This is the first time I have done anything like this. I have never read text for anyone at anytime. I am a public speaker. I tend to talk far too fast for most people. When I looked at this website and the goal of teaching english, I intentionally slowed my speech down for the purpose of helping people learn english. I read the criticism for sounding slow and boring. I was then told to pick up the pace. I picked up the pace and then was described as "lifeless". There is issue of typos, that I stumble across. I initially took it upon myself to repair that myself. However if you read the text...some of the time it does not make sense. As I am not an english teacher, I do not think I should take it upon myself to correct someone else's writing. Additionally it helps to show where the typos are, by hearing it read as it is written. Of course we have the challenge of British English and American English.
Ideally, "constructive" criticism would be best. This is the first time I have ever tried to read text for people. There are a lot of different opinions out there. We have a saying where I live..."you cannot please all of the people all of the time and only some of the people some of the time." Anything that you can say that can help me to do a better job and that in fact helps you to do a better job would help us all. I will read slower, faster, more emotion, less emotion, like text, not like text...???? It is very confusing. If you read the text, most of the time the stories do not "flow" as they are strictly being used to make a point and not be a real story.
Whew...with all of that said. I welcome constructive criticism and anything that can help me to do my job better. Anything that I can do to help you accomplish your goals, please let me know!? Please remember. I am not a teacher, have never been a teacher, do not know who my audience is and I am relying on you to guide me in this.
Thank you all!
Brandee :D |
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Brandee New Member

Joined: 29 Aug 2008 Posts: 4 Location: Marathon, FL Florida Keys
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#57 (permalink) Fri Sep 05, 2008 2:16 am Native speakers wanted! |
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MrPedantic wrote: | I wonder whether it would be useful for ESL students to have three versions of each text.
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I think that's a good idea. Allow 'em to get used to listening to different people with different speaking styles. |
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Martino I'm new here and I like it ;-)

Joined: 29 Aug 2008 Posts: 17 Location: Manila, Philippines
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#58 (permalink) Fri Sep 05, 2008 7:51 am Native speakers wanted! |
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Quote: | I wonder whether it would be useful for ESL students to have three versions of each text. |
If we go here http://accent.gmu.edu/ we can have many versions of the same text. |
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Molly I'm a Communicator ;-)
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#59 (permalink) Fri Sep 05, 2008 8:06 am Native speakers wanted! |
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Quote: | I have never read text for anyone at anytime. I am a public speaker. I tend to talk far too fast for most people. When I looked at this website and the goal of teaching english, I intentionally slowed my speech down for the purpose of helping people learn english. I read the criticism for sounding slow and boring. I was then told to pick up the pace. I picked up the pace and then was described as "lifeless". |
Quote: | As I am not an english teacher, I do not think I should take it upon myself to correct someone else's writing. |
I think the problem here is not with you, Brandee. Speaking written text is a skill, and let no one say it isn't. The problem here also lies with the register or style of the texts that are presented, they are written-written texts, IMO, and not really texts that leasily lend themselves to spoken communication. As an experiment, do try taking one of the texts and changing it so it "becomes your own", re-record it and let Torsten and Alan see where they should be going with all this.
Keep your chin up.
Quote: | If you read the text, most of the time the stories do not "flow" as they are strictly being used to make a point and not be a real story | .
I agree. I personally think the texts on this site are not that well-written. They need work. |
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Molly I'm a Communicator ;-)
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#60 (permalink) Fri Sep 05, 2008 10:31 am Brandee's Readings |
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Brandee wrote: | "you cannot please all of the people all of the time and only some of the people some of the time." Anything that you can say that can help me to do a better job and that in fact helps you to do a better job would help us all. I will read slower, faster, more emotion, less emotion, like text, not like text...???? |
Well roared, lion :D
You're right, you can't please everybody. There are 10 cooks and 10 recipes, and at the end of the day the broth is spoilt. The broth - material for learners of the English language - should be presented in a way that it invites guests/learners to stay. The restaurant owners - Alan and Torsten - provide you with recipes, material and money. You can make amendments to obvious mistakes and give your feedback to the hands that feed you, but you should stay on track as far as the cuisine goes (coz it ain't your restaurant).
Brandee, you have a very good voice, accent and intonation. Familiarise yourself with the text prior to recording it, and then read it emphatically. The rest will follow :P _________________ Test of English as a Foreign Language TOEFL Preparation & TOEFL Vocabulary Learn more: How to Become an English Teacher |
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Ralf Language Coach

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