Personal Profile (Unit 3)

[Payal Gupta]

Hello Torsten

I am Payal Gupta.
I am from India.
I am 25 years old.
I am doing .Net course from NIIT.
I am interested in academic writing and learning english.
I am single yet.
I am not very tall.
I am fond of studying.

Correct me if I am wrong...

[Beeesneees]

Hello Papal,

Welcome to the forums. You're doing really well - there are just a few errors for correction.

The word 'English' should always be written with a capital 'E'. (The first letters of other languages should also be capitalised as they are proper nouns')

I am doing a .NET course. In English, the article is very important.

'I am single yet' sounds very stilted. We would say: I am still single.
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[Jae3]

I'm Jae Liao
I'm very old , please allow me to keep it in secret.
I'm from Taiwan.
I'm logistic specialist in a MLM company, it's my new job.
I'm not talll and a little bit fat.
I'm married.
I'm interested in playing golf.

[Dhan]

Hi I am Dhan
From India
I have done my MBA & working as Hr.
I want to be trainer & improve my English communication skills.
I am interested playing Keyboard

[Nayda]

I'm Naida Valentic.
I'm 25 years old. (I'm 25.)
I'm from Bosnia and Herzegovina.
I finished facultaty of Economic.
I'm not very tall.
I'm married.
I'm interested in reading and writting books, travelling, photography, fashion, improving my English and learning Arabic language.

[Caykur2013]

I'm Tommy.
I'm 33 years old. I'm from Viet Nam.
I'm a embedded software programmer.
I'm married and I have a son.
I'm interested in playing football, travelling, photography...